Some people, I think
Are meant to walk alone in this world
Traveling the rubble path of life
Viewing what should be vibrant
In a lack luster fade
Through travel dusted, cracked lenses
That were once rose hued
What was once a happy memory
Now disfigured by the water stains
Painted onto their lenses
By the mournful brush
Of tear stained lashes
Are meant to walk alone in this world
Traveling the rubble path of life
Viewing what should be vibrant
In a lack luster fade
Through travel dusted, cracked lenses
That were once rose hued
What was once a happy memory
Now disfigured by the water stains
Painted onto their lenses
By the mournful brush
Of tear stained lashes
– Awkward Babble 2016
And in the mirror all cracked and broke,
We see a familiar face, familiar yet not quite us, not our own.
Perhaps a friend, a parent, a partner?
Three in ten know, three in ten don’t,
Three in ten understand but only one is I.
Or perhaps you?
Tattered tainted cracked and painted.
The finest work of art this world has ever known…. 🙂
Thanks for the read.
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Love the response, thank you! Do you mind if I add it in with a link to your blog? 🙂
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oh wait! I see that you already posted, I’ll just link then, if ok? 🙂
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Go for it 🙂
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Great, thank you!
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I like!!
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Thank you! ❤
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Beautiful words you penned to capture that beautiful imagery. Lovely. thanks for sharing your poems.
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Thank you so much, you’ve just made my day! 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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Wow nice writingg👌🏻👌🏻
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Coloring Outside the Lines and commented:
Check this out please. 😀
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Oh wow! I’m very flattered, thank you and will do 🙂
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I’m always willing to share posts. I just am limited on time as I begin the fun heading to Arizona permanently
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Oh Wow! That’s a big move and a huge endeavor. I certainly wish you luck! It was quite a trial when I moved from California to Alabama a few years ago – so I know how that goes!
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From Ohio to Payson, AZ is 1950 miles, and we’re going from 1200 square feet with basement to 800 square feet in a trailer. So thinking out stud is a problem before moving.
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Oh No! I just realized though – does that mean you’re leaving all of your beautiful trees behind?!
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I’m trading in about 4 acres for 6 feet on each side. I’ll have a blue Spruce, 2 apple trees, and a pear tree. There’s a bunch of mountains with pines on all sides of me
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Oh Goodness, that’s quite a change indeed. Will this be permanent or temporary till you work your way into something else?
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I transferred out there. I’m staying and will play in the mountains.
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I love / miss mountains. The “mountains” around Birmingham are what we call hills in California lol
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My home will be may under 5000 feet in elevation. My ride home from work will be staring at 7600 feet of pine and red Rock mountain. I can go up to 8000 feet in about 25 miles or down to 2500 feet in same distance. Not many days over 100 or below 20 degrees
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Nice! sounds like a beautiful area
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I can’t believe I got the chance to go there. I got lucky with finding a new house already. Now if the old one sells, I’ll be on cloud nine…. until I have to pack😉
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That’s great! I’m glad you’ve found something so exciting for the next chapter in your life 🙂 I’ll keep my fingers crossed for the sale
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Many thanks. 😀
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Great job on this! Has incredible feel to it. 😀
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Thank you!!
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Very good consonance in this poem.
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Thank you! 🙂 I hope it makes up for the fact that I misspelled “lens” lol… I swear as I get older my mind decides that the simple little things don’t need to be monitored for accuracy anymore 😉
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Couldn’t you just go back and make a quick edit?
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Oh I could, but I wondered how it would look to go in and fix it after the fact of being pointed out to me. Now that Im actually saying that I realize how silly that sounds. Sometimes I get too wrapped up in my head lol
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Is it “Lense” because it is a compound lens of the glasses and the eyes?
This makes me want to write a response poem, but I’m at work right now
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It’s lense because I misspelled lens.
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That was lovely. It connects and talks to me so deeply.
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Thank you so much, hearing that someone was able to connect is the best compliment
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Indeed
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Beautiful poem. Mind if you could check out my poetry blog?
https://poetry2473.wordpress.com
We could follow each other if you like my posts.
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Lovely!
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Thank you, and another bigger thanks for reading!
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